@pascal thanks for finding the time to review my proposal, but it seems my proposal was a little long, given your comment on my proposal and @r0bby’s on this thread Tips for a successful proposal, 17 pages might have been a little too much. I have done some changes which involves @r0bby’s tips which says, proposals should lead with the template questions, so i moved the answers to those questions right after my abstract as he suggested. Also i tried deleting some details to reduce the number of pages but i could only lay off 1 page. Everything i have so far in my proposal seems very important. And most of the spaces is due to the mockup. @pascal @sunbiz, @r0bby i would be very happy if you could find some time in your busy schedule to look at it’s current state and provide some feedbacks 
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And @pascal if you think i have deleted some relevant information, because you told me not to worry about the length, that is not a problem, i used git to manage different versions of proposal, so a simple git reset will bring back everything in my last commit.
Ivange Larry.